Comments on: teaser tuesday: back in the saddle edition http://www.sarahevekelly.com/writing/teaser-tuesday-back-in-the-saddle-edition/ Thu, 09 Sep 2010 00:45:13 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.5 By: Bryn Greenwood http://www.sarahevekelly.com/writing/teaser-tuesday-back-in-the-saddle-edition/#comment-726 Bryn Greenwood Wed, 03 Jun 2009 03:44:48 +0000 http://www.sarahevekelly.com/?p=381#comment-726 Oh, what a conflicted feeling. That's a nice sensation to sympathize deeply with two characters opposed to each other. I want her to be free of him, but at the same time I want some comfort for him. <abbr><em>Bryn Greenwood’s last blog post..<a href="http://bryngreenwood.wordpress.com/2009/06/02/teaser-tuesday-lie-olivia-the-paramedic/" rel="nofollow">Teaser Tuesday: LIE (Olivia & the paramedic)</a></abbr></em> Oh, what a conflicted feeling. That’s a nice sensation to sympathize deeply with two characters opposed to each other. I want her to be free of him, but at the same time I want some comfort for him.

Bryn Greenwood’s last blog post..Teaser Tuesday: LIE (Olivia & the paramedic)

]]> By: parametric http://www.sarahevekelly.com/writing/teaser-tuesday-back-in-the-saddle-edition/#comment-725 parametric Tue, 02 Jun 2009 22:39:24 +0000 http://www.sarahevekelly.com/?p=381#comment-725 Wow, I feel for the narrator's tired, stressed husband here. I want to give him a hug. :( Wow, I feel for the narrator’s tired, stressed husband here. I want to give him a hug. :(

]]> By: Jan http://www.sarahevekelly.com/writing/teaser-tuesday-back-in-the-saddle-edition/#comment-724 Jan Tue, 02 Jun 2009 18:36:21 +0000 http://www.sarahevekelly.com/?p=381#comment-724 I have a great fondness for this kind of complex, psychologically-aware character. Love the ending line, too. Glad you're not quitting. :) I have a great fondness for this kind of complex, psychologically-aware character. Love the ending line, too.

Glad you’re not quitting. :)

]]> By: Courtney http://www.sarahevekelly.com/writing/teaser-tuesday-back-in-the-saddle-edition/#comment-723 Courtney Tue, 02 Jun 2009 17:14:28 +0000 http://www.sarahevekelly.com/?p=381#comment-723 You are such a beautiful writer, and a beautiful person inside and out. The complexity of your character perfectly mirrored the complexity of her world. I love that she's totally aware of everything, from her ruined hood to how she'd hurt her husband. I'm absolutely in awe! Bravo! You are such a beautiful writer, and a beautiful person inside and out. The complexity of your character perfectly mirrored the complexity of her world. I love that she’s totally aware of everything, from her ruined hood to how she’d hurt her husband. I’m absolutely in awe! Bravo!

]]> By: Jennie http://www.sarahevekelly.com/writing/teaser-tuesday-back-in-the-saddle-edition/#comment-722 Jennie Tue, 02 Jun 2009 14:38:38 +0000 http://www.sarahevekelly.com/?p=381#comment-722 Very nicely written and it keeps your attention. (though I could never write in present tense even if my life depended on it. 'Just cook me, villian, it'd be a much nicer reprieve!' lol) I am wondering about all the punctuation in the last paragraph, though. The colons and semi-colons. Maybe it should be broken up into seperate sentences? I don't know, it just kinda seemed jumbled and awkward to me. Great job and the characters bring about many questions. I adore the fact she likes the fact she knows how to inflict pain 'just in case'. :-) Very nicely written and it keeps your attention. (though I could never write in present tense even if my life depended on it. ‘Just cook me, villian, it’d be a much nicer reprieve!’ lol) I am wondering about all the punctuation in the last paragraph, though. The colons and semi-colons. Maybe it should be broken up into seperate sentences? I don’t know, it just kinda seemed jumbled and awkward to me.

Great job and the characters bring about many questions. I adore the fact she likes the fact she knows how to inflict pain ‘just in case’. :-)

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